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    Atomic Punk WinterlessIceness's Avatar
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    Default NEED A MANUSCRIPT FEEDBACK

    Excuse the caps, just getting your attention

    I'd recently completed my fiction novel, and if anyone is interested in some bed-time reading I will gladly send you the MSS.

    About the book - it's the first volume of my fantasy/sci-fi/drama series Season of Ashes . In a world that first appears to be close to Victorian age Britain, main protagonist Ellena Barrett - a 17 year old boarding school graduate - moves to the capital of Anglea where she acts against her prejudice and re-unites with her former best friend. After being caught in a crossfire between ancient, but technologically advanced movement Vheos and their Renegades, she herself becomes part of the group that begins her journey.

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    All in all my book is a very strange hybrid that I could classify as Twilight meets Harry Potter meets Matrix, with some LOTR-esque historical deviations. It's written from the main heroine's perspective (so there's a prominent teenage turmoil/confusion about life and oneself vibe in the book), but it also features my alternative theory on the creation of the world, political satire and poetry.

    If this interests you, let me know and I'll send you the text. I would appreciate any feedback from anyone.

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    I would like to give it a read!

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    Cheers dude! PM me your email mate

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    i'm game.

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    Right on Winter. Having just finished reading a novel a couple nights ago I'm looking for the next read. Would be happy to read your novel. My email on it's way in PM.
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